Are my rap lyrics good ?:)?

At least your lyrics make sense, even if they are VERY VERY suicidal. It's sad and makes me hope that you can find someone to talk to about all this stuff. Sometimes writing is a great outlet, so keep writing and never give in to your inner demons. Many of us have them. Don't let them win. You're better than them.

Anyway, the lyrics are written a lot better than most musicians I see on here or other forums. My one criticism is that you rhyme too much ending in "tion". Maybe put to a beat this will all flow together than what it sounds like in my head. You'll also need a chorus.

Hello, anything you write is just fine, if it helps you feel better. I read your profile - thanks for staying open - and read mine as you like. I wish I could fill the holes in your heart from when nobody was there, but all I can do is to say is stay with us. Whether you know it or not, you are special, the only person on the planet that's you. I'm tempted to go all "Mental Health" on you, but you need more coming into your heart, not advice in words. You're good with words, too. Try some volunteer work, like in a county nursing home, or soup kitchen. You'll get some love back. You're overdue. Cold out here tonight. Tune for you and me:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oouFE51HcqM

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