Yahoo Answers is shutting down on May 4th, 2021 (Eastern Time) and beginning April 20th, 2021 (Eastern Time) the Yahoo Answers website will be in read-only mode. There will be no changes to other Yahoo properties or services, or your Yahoo account. You can find more information about the Yahoo Answers shutdown and how to download your data on this help page.
Trending News
Do poems written from the heart read as well as professional crafted perfect poems?
I managed to come back at last,
and saw some familiar names were cast
on the pages like old times.
This is just a greeting. BUT IT RHYMES!
I'm back...
16 Answers
- ?Lv 75 years agoFavorite Answer
Yes!!! and sometimes better then pros..
Happy to sea U and U sea me,
Lovely ladie comes back and free,
Write prose or poems from the heart,
Dunno nothin' more but it's a start.
- 5 years ago
I think all poems originate from the heart, but the folks that depend on a 1st draft I think
for the most part are missing the boat. Good poetry takes work, editing, re-working lines.
Compare to a song. A songwriter bleeds through the process of writing a song, both music
and lyrics.
A poet always thinks there initial work is a masterpiece, including me, and it's a fallacy with
few exceptions. Writing from the heart OF COURSE is good, but it's lazy to think "that's it"
unless one is not serious about their own poetry,
Great to see you LC. If you post here more, I promise I will..he he, not sure you want that
but hope you do. Thomas
- 5 years ago
I won't rhyme, this time,
I'm not of a mind,
but
I no longer post poetry here
though as a passion, I hold it dear,
Oh dear I said I wouldn't rhyme?
I'm uncertain any poet can be deemed "professional" unless by definition that means paid for publication, in which case I've read a few Professionals whos work makes great cat litter box liner.
I've never, doubt I'll ever understand "Perfect" certainly it's ephemeral. Hugs.
- ?Lv 65 years ago
LC, professionally crafted poems only happen to be when the poet who writes from the heart is also a professional writer.
- How do you think about the answers? You can sign in to vote the answer.
- Anonymous5 years ago
Do football plays designed from the heart score as many touchdowns as those crafted by professional coaches?
Are surgical operations on the brain done from the heart just as safe as those done by professional brain surgeons?
Is car repair done from the heart as effective in fixing your car as that done by professional mechanics?
Is a bridge designed from the heart less likely to fall down than those designed by civil engineers?
You're incredibly stupid.
- Caz :) xLv 75 years ago
There is no better poem than a poem from the heart
it wont cut you when your eyes are closed it will hold you, and craft you into a rose .
and in a dark and dismal light, it with it's words more beautiful than a baby bird singing in spring time
will lie a metaphor over your heart... that will trickle slowly into your bones and simplify the mind ..
That's just a lode of Bull-sh*t really LOL
not professional or perfect ... Just my normal crap LOL
Welcome back ... x
- ttteo0328Lv 65 years ago
I managed to return after a long time
This route was in my heart and mind
It flows like happy memories of days gone by
I saw old friends like good old times
Poems are always from the hearts
They bellow like good old wine
Never a machine can revise.
- ?Lv 75 years ago
Poetry is about Now (Not How)
The past sweeps through the door
My aches and pains disappear
What was the long waiting for
But to know and expose every fear.
Here we can dance in delight
Embraced by old friends we hold dear
Swirling through cachets of light
Our past and our future made clear.
The mansion's a shambles
This old poet rambles
The floor strewn with brambles
Yet memory gambols.
Rhyme falls away and the heart is revealed kneeling at the altar of friendship it cheers. Surrounded by loved ones the end times are sweeter and feelings create their divine rhyme and meter.
Hugs and welcome home (to what is left of it.)
- 5 years ago
She poked her head through the old swinging door
Saw a few friendly faces, and then a few more
She started to grin as she caught Cheesy's eye
Then she let out a holler and slapped her right thigh.