Ines Maria Bravo

My story is about a War in a fantasy world that I made up.

My main character, which is a girl, was born in the times of War. She lived hidden in a pacific land with her parents and she didnt knew about the existence of this War. She meets a boy and they become really close friends.

He really liked her hair because it was a messy blonde and umkempt. ( the reason why Im saying the color of her hair here is because, this main character is going to become a really strong female, and I made her blonde because I just dont like the stereotype of "stupid blondies".

I think its important to some girls see that not every blond is stupid or dumb. back to the story:)

One sad day, the boy had to leave and move somewhere else, and has a gift, the girl made a small braid and cut it and gave it to the boy so he could always remember her. ( what im trying to say is that she had a very happy childhood until he left.)

My story starts to get darker from here: The war reached the land where she was living. The soldiers killed her parents and kidnapped her. They left her in a place very far away from light. It was always dark. People made her a slave, and when she was 15, some even abused her.

It was hard life. And she lived like this for more 5 years.

(...) when she reached her 20s, she faked her death and ran away. It took her 5 days of running to finally see some light, and 3 more to reach a city.

Im going to skip a bit: She meets someone else again. At first they didnt really liked each other but then, with some time, they start to talk and become finally friends. He also remembered her childhood friend a bit.

They have the bestest relationship has friends until The war strikes again, and he gets killed, leaving her alone again.

So thats it. My main story and ofcourse the story doesnt finish there. I will show every detail about every Nation of the world ( there are only 4 ), I will add other characters and their adventures.

I made up every name of the nations, people, races, spells, swords, weapons, plants, magical creatures, language, culture, (...) I even made up hairstyles and designs. I want this to be totally original!!

What do you think of it? Im only 15 and my english isnt very good, but i only want to know if this is a good idea or not, and if you would like to read or not, because I will write this in my language anyways.

Thank you for reading!

My main character which is a girl had a very close childhood friend but one day he had to leave, and move somewhere else. I have flashbacks of their friendship which makes me very happy to think about it. I guess people can relate to that case where you had this friend you liked. Since my story is very dark, I wanted to add a bit of "light" to it, and then I thought of keeping this idea! BUT...

My problem is when she gets older, she meets another guy, an they become friends, and the story goes around that. In other words, its the same thing with different details.

I really like both stories. I think the 2nd one is more important is because the whole story is around their friendship. I like the first one because i want to add some happyness to the story. I dont know if i should keep both or only of them because its kinda of same.

I hope it wasnt confusing

Iam only 15 and this is just an idea. I want to know is if you think this is a good idea or a bad one!

I know I said "book Idea" but Im not sure If im going to write it or draw it.

My idea is about another universe and no such thing as Earth exists.

In that Universe there is a world where 4 nations are always fighting over different opinions, thoughts and beliefs.

My main character, born in one of those 4 nations, has experienced only pain, until she meets someone that changes her way of seeing things.

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Thats basically it. I want to show a War between 4 completely different Nations.

I know it sounds really cliche, but there are many flashbacks in my mind where there is this girl and her father telling stories to each other; There is people suffering. But the picture that always comes to my head is people smiling. People are fighting and at war, but some still smile. I dont really have a reason for why they smile, but thats what always comes to my mind.

I wanted to add a bit of fantasy and magic to it and maybe some magical creatures such as dragons.

Just tell me what you think about this! Its only a idea anyways, If im going to use it i have to work on it later..

Thank you for reading!

So I remembe watching these 2 guys recording some supernatural activity and they posted a new video every thursday i believe. I dont remember their names but i know they are both 2 men, and i also dont remember their channel name, so if anyone knows what im talking about please tell me the name of the channel.

I remember seeing some videos where they used a recorder and a radio and they use it to ask ghosts some questions like: "Can we help you?" or "what happened?" "can you give us a sign that you are here with us?". Usually they get intellingent answers from them.

One of they episodes i remember very well, i think it was in a train railroad and a ghost kept ignoring them until those 2 guys asked him some questions like: "do you want us to leave?If you want us to leave can you give us a sign?" and the ghost did and some min after that the ghost started saying "Im gonna kill you" "leave me im evil" "Im evil" and they said "where are you?" and has a reply "behind you" and out of nowhere they felt like someone was blowing wind to their back.

So im sorry if i didnt explain well, but if anyone knows their channel please tell me. I completely forgot their channel name or their actual name. Thank you

Im looking for a multiplayer game, -not a online one, not at all- where you can do the quests and see the story with somebody else, like Portal 2 or Dead Island. Any suggestions? If you need a more detailed description please ask and i will gladly answer =). Thank you

First of all, im a NaruHina fan but i cant believe no one hasnt said the obvious already:

What i see is that NaruSaku has more chances of happening - i dont want it but i have to accpet the truth - because:

- why would Kishimoto make Naruto like Sakura for so long for nothing ( by that i mean like, naruto starts liking Hinata...) i hope you get my point. It would be a waste of time honestly. Naruto liked sakura for so long for nothing.

- enough with the sakura lie. Big drama! There are bad lies and good lies, sakura didnt do it on porpuse ( hope i spelled it right ( im not english sorry for grammar) she does like Naruto, well at least a bit. Its true she wasnt nice for naruto in the beginning, she didnt respect him but welll...kushina didnt respect minato in the begining as well and look at what happened...

- kushina advice...about picking the girl. I dk if its a rumor or if naruto is going to do it, but if it was true then sakura does looks like kushina:

1- the hair.

2- their childhood ( always made fun of them because of their appearence)

3- both have colossal strengh

Its true kushina didnt hit minato or sakura is always saying "tabane" or so but they cant be equal.

Kushina said "someone like your mom" not someone who is weird, that unfortunetly the only person i think of is Hinata...

- some people say hinatas love for naruto is stupid because she never got to know him. Well, she did saw a bit of his suffer durind their childhoods, he was so strong by trying to be recognized by everyone that hinata just started to admire him, and wanted to have that strengh as well. She wants to know more about him and wants him to know that she recgonizes his strengh and that as always respected him.

- i think thats all i gotta say if i did forget something else i will write it on comments

I really need help!! This got worse i mean. When i was 7-9 i always like to draw a bit.. Now im 14 almost 15 and i cant stop drawing!

As a teenager i have so many problems and issues and with my family as well, but my main problem in drawing. I cant stop buying sketchbooks, i draw during class, during lunch, during night, everyday all the time!! Erggh! I dont know if im full of stress and loneliness or something i cant control my drawing addiction!!! Every year is even worse!! And then my mom is super cOntroller. Shes always after me, seeing what i do, always comparing me to other people. True i got even worse grades bcuz of my addiction... Thank you for reading. Please dont say i gotta stop drawing becquse i know that i need to know how. Please heeelp!

These are not main characters. I hope it isnt confusing. And also its fantasy type o story ( proba ily +12) but i really need help from everyone!

So since i was a kid ive always loved "little red riding hood" and i thought i could use it somehow so heres my idea:

Girl -> Raven ( not sure about the name..) - dark hair - white skin - yellow eyes - she is very shy yet dangerous. Very. XD ( based on the wolf )

Boy -> Jasper - blond hair - green eyes - very strong and serious yet silly ( based on red riding hood ; please dont think of him like a shy or weak person, imagine the red riding hood boy version. The hot version. ( xD )

Its just an idea. Im just asking if i should use it or is it stupid. What do you think. If any questions i will answer right away!! Thank you for reading!

These are character ideas. Is it good? Copyright!!!

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Please help me. Is this character idea lame?

These are not main characters. I hope it isnt confusing. And also its fantasy type o story ( proba ily +12) but i really need help from everyone!

So since i was a kid ive always loved "little red riding hood" and i thought i could use it somehow so heres my idea:

Girl -> Raven ( not sure about the name..) - dark hair - white skin - yellow eyes - she is very shy yet dangerous. Very. XD ( based on the wolf )

Boy -> Jasper - blond hair - green eyes - very strong and serious yet silly ( based on red riding hood ; please dont think of him like a shy or weak person, imagine the red riding hood boy version. The hot version. ( xD )

Its just an idea. Im just asking if i should use it or is it stupid. What do you think. If any questions i will answer right away!! Thank you for reading!

These are not main characters. I hope it isnt confusing. And also its fantasy type o story ( proba ily +12) but i really need help from everyone!

So since i was a kid ive always loved "little red riding hood" and i thought i could use it somehow so heres my idea:

Girl -> Raven ( not sure about the name..) - dark hair - white skin - yellow eyes - she is very shy yet dangerous. Very. XD ( based on the wolf )

Boy -> Jasper - blond hair - green eyes - very strong and serious yet silly ( based on red riding hood ; please dont think of him like a shy or weak person, imagine the red riding hood boy version. The hot version. ( xD )

Its just an idea. Im just asking if i should use it or is it stupid. What do you think. If any questions i will answer right away!! Thank you for reading!

These are not main characters. I hope it isnt confusing. And also its fantasy type o story ( proba ily +12) but i really need help from everyone!

So since i was a kid ive always loved "little red riding hood" and i thought i could use it somehow so heres my idea:

Girl -> Raven ( not sure about the name..) - dark hair - white skin - yellow eyes - she is very shy yet dangerous. Very. XD ( based on the wolf )

Boy -> Jasper - blond hair - green eyes - very strong and serious yet silly ( based on red riding hood ; please dont think of him like a shy or weak person, imagine the red riding hood boy version. The hot version. ( xD )

Its just an idea. Im just asking if i should use it or is it stupid. What do you think. If any questions i will answer right away!! Thank you for reading!

I sware i wouldnt ask if i wasnt sure:

So this has been going for one year. And like a month ago my mom said her arm was hurting and has a worried daughter i asked her if i could see it. I sware the god it looked like a human bite i wouldnt say any of these unless i was really sure! I even got so obssesed with that weird event that i even bite my arm to make sure it looked like that humab bite, and the form was!

This other two happen when i was alone:

One day i was watching tv, and when im alone im a very calm and quiet person.

Suddenly i felt like someone was scratching me. Since im logical i thought it was my imagination. I kept feeling it until i look my hand and it was bleeding! I was so scared. Then to calm me i thought something like: " maybe i touched something that injured my hand" ( my language is noy english so i dont know how to translate it)

This one was the most confusing, i was once again alone at home, cleaning my wardrobe and when i was done i closed both wooden doors. I left like for 2 min and when i got back to my room one of the doors was half open. And i though thats weird maybe i didnt close it ( that happens to everyone.) and like some doors mine makes that sound when you close it so this time i was really sure i closed it and then i went to the kitchen to drink water and when i came back the same damn door was open again and i got scared! I sware i closed it! Ilthis needs a logical explanation? Is it really a ghost? Can somebody really help me!!?

Algo a mais a alertou: por entre os dedos da rapariga, pequenas labaredas de fogo dançavam. Nao ardia. Não magoava. Não doia.

O seu corpo dançava por dentro também enquanto as pequenas formas de fogo, que felizmente, não abrangiam mais, continuavam na mão dela.

Sem compreender não apagou o fogo e nem entrou em pânico.

Aquele quente. Aquele poder. Era agradavel. Era doce.

Que turbilhão de emoções.

Felicia não era capaz de parar ficar surpreendida só de pensar.

A transição do hábitual e gélido corpo para o reconfortante quente.

Era mesmo bom. Atraente.

 Não haveria qualquer explicação para o que aconteceu a Felicia Hawking, mas decerteza que não ia descartar algo tao curioso.

O que vc acha?

Felicia estava, sem dúvida, bastante irritada e como todas as discussoões que havia na famosa casa dos Hawking ela dirigiou-se á sala, enconstou--se ao cadeirão verde, perto da lareira e lá ficou, obstinada.

Apesar de ter consciência que era uma mera rapariga e que vivia agora os seus 15 anos, fazer birra já nao era muito apropriado á sua idade, mas, mesmo assim, ela não o podia evitar. Fazia parte dela.

  A vasta Lua marcou o seu lugar, fazendo o sol desaparecer e revelar a noite mais escura de todos os outros dias, deixando apenas a luz artificial iluminar todas as decoraçoes apavorosas como abóboras com caras horripilantes tanto como os fatos aterradores e outros mais. Halloween. O dia mais tenebroso do ano e o mais divertido. O dia mais temido e ainda mais ambicionado.

 Nenhuma luz das estrelas era avistado. Nada brilhava. Apenas a lua e as luzes falsas da noite.

 Enquanto isso, ali estava ela, casmurra como tudo querendo fazer os possiveis para chamar a atenção, algo para que alguém reparasse nela ou o minimo sinal só para se fazer notar. Tratava-se de orgulho também.

 Era muito orgulhosa para que fosse ela a falar de qualquer assunto.

Mesmo assim: uma noite daquelas? Só era uma em cada ano. Não pelos disfarçes. Não pelos doces. Não pelas decoracões. Pelo desafio. Aquele que só ela sabia.

Estaria ela disposta a recusar um desafio? 

  Felicia contraiu o seu lábio por um segundo. Ela pensava mesmo nisso. Naquele proposto jogo.

Irritada pelas decisões que tomava no seu interior fez o seu sangue percorrer a alta velocidade.

Indiscretamente, tocou ligeiramente no bolso das suas calças de ganga pretas e por sua vez, estremeçeu.

Um arrepio.

Agora, agarrara no que continha no bolso e sem perder mais tempo, com a maior rapidez, lançara aquela pequena matéria para a lareira.

O corpo sobressaltou-se uma última vez ao ver aquela pequena matéria, parecida com pouco menos de um terço de papel, que derretia, ao ser queimado por brasas fortes e ardentes. ©Copyright inês bravo

Ela ia dirigir-se á festa. Aliás, a mesma ficava a escassos metros de casa.

Não sei porque mas acho que esta mal escrito. Quando o digo para mim parece que esta errado. Alguém pode corrigir?

so i had this dream like 2 days ago but i just cant get it out of my mind and perhaps it means something. Oh well, lets ignore my ideas and go directly to the subject (just ignore my grammar, i just need advice and if i really do use this idea i will probabibily write it (on my language!). here it goes:

it started with a girl with dark hair and she was sitting on a green chair near the fireplace looking angry and sad at same time and it has Halloween day. She had a neighbor (another girl) (and please dont be mad its just a dream so i will explain exactly what i saw and if it seems to weird, please understand it.) and that neighbor looked kinda of angry and she was walking directly to the first girl house (the girl with dark hair.). (sorry if its confusing!) When she was about to ring the bell something weird starts to flow in her hand. It was water. That girl looked scared looking at it and she had reason for it: the water started to stay out of control and she pratically "flooded" the first girl garden (the girl with dark hair) with water. The girl with dark hair heard some noise from outside and she ran out to see what it was going on. When she opened the door she saw that girl trying to control that water (and i im not sure what she said i think the girl with the dark hair said something like: you gotta control it, just do it, use your mind. (im really not sure what she said, the exact words thats the only thing i wasnt able to remember well.)

And my dream was basically the hole halloween night. That girl was able to control the water. the first girl could control fire and they find other people and something happen to the city later (remember all in the same night!) and decided to only talk about the first part.

Sorry if its confusing but i cant stop thinking about it and what do you think? if i can make a clear idea, where everybody CAN ACTUALLY UNDERSTAND a thing would you aprove this idea? well, since this is on "books and authors" i mean like writting of course. So do you think i just should ignore this dream or go for it? try to make something produtive or at least just for fun?

Please ignore my grammar issues, i just need a advice.

thank you for reading.

http://m.youtube.com/index?desktop_uri=%2F&gl=US#/... on part 0:48 or 0:46 you will see a girl with goggles or whatevar. Can you please tell me what anime is she from?? I need To know Badly!

Sorry for my bad english Or grammar, im going To write this on my languange. Im only 14. I just wanna make sure my idea worths it. Its fantasy adventure type, about sea, myth creatures, demons, guardians, steampunk style. I had this idea yesterday so here it goes:

Long time ago, a guardian created a world made of peace, pure and all the Good things there were.

She created us, humans and she lOved us so much that all she Ever wanted was To let us live forever with her.

Those were only dreams. We quickly learned the feeling angry, then sadness, so as revenge, hurt and other bad feelings of ours. We started To get evil and out of control.

The guardian forgived our sins and grabbed everything that was bad inside of us ( as i already said The sadness, hurt, angry, etc...), created a portal To another world, and locked everything bad of us inside of it.( she locked the portal as well) (sorry if its confusing).

Years passed, and unfortunatly, our guardian got weaker and weaker and died. Her soul didnt want To leave us, so, her bright soul went To the sky, and the moon was created, and everyday when it gets dark, she illuminates the sky.

(...) humans started To die as well and Their souls went To the sky, allways near the guardian, so the stars were created.

( most of things must be keeped has a mystery, please dont get bothered if you dont understand)

FinallY: the portal To the other world, the world of our dark feelings, broke, and everything got messy, and confused, instead we getting Back has the normal humans ( full of bad feelings with only some Good feelings), others species were created. Some of them kept beeing pure, others changed, others became monsters ( and demons). No longer it was a peace world, everyone feared everyone. This IS what i have so far. Im so sorry for the bad grammar and english as well. Any questions, just ask gently xp. Did you understand? Did you liked it? Remember this IS just the legend. The TRue adventure story isnt this one!

Sorry for my bad english Or grammar, im going To write this on my languange. Im only 14. I just wanna make sure my idea worths it. Its fantasy adventure type, about sea, myth creatures, demons, guardians, steampunk style. I had this idea yesterday so here it goes:

Long time ago, a guardian created a world made of peace, pure and all the Good things there were.

She created us, humans and she lOved us so much that all she Ever wanted was To let us live forever with her.

Those were only dreams. We quickly learned the feeling angry, then sadness, so as revenge, hurt and other bad feelings of ours. We started To get evil and out of control.

The guardian forgived our sins and grabbed everything that was bad inside of us ( as i already said The sadness, hurt, angry, etc...), created a portal To another world, and locked everything bad of us inside of it.( she locked the portal as well) (sorry if its confusing).

Years passed, and unfortunatly, our guardian got weaker and weaker and died. Her soul didnt want To leave us, so, her bright soul went To the sky, and the moon was created, and everyday when it gets dark, she illuminates the sky.

(...) humans started To die as well and Their souls went To the sky, allways near the guardian, so the stars were created.

( most of things must be keeped has a mystery, please dont get bothered if you dont understand)

FinallY: the portal To the other world, the world of our dark feelings, broke, and everything got messy, and confused, instead we getting Back has the normal humans ( full of bad feelings with only some Good feelings), others species were created. Some of them kept beeing pure, others changed, others became monsters ( and demons). No longer it was a peace world, everyone feared everyone. This IS what i have so far. Im so sorry for the bad grammar and english as well. Any questions, just ask gently xp. Did you understand? Did you liked it? Remember this IS just the legend. The TRue adventure story isnt this one!

Sorry for my bad english Or grammar, im going To write this on my languange. Im only 14. I just wanna make sure my idea worths it. Its fantasy adventure type, about sea, myth creatures, demons, guardians, steampunk style. I had this idea yesterday so here it goes:

Long time ago, a guardian created a world made of peace, pure and all the Good things there were.

She created us, humans and she lOved us so much that all she Ever wanted was To let us live forever with her.

Those were only dreams. We quickly learned the feeling angry, then sadness, so as revenge, hurt and other bad feelings of ours. We started To get evil and out of control.

The guardian forgived our sins and grabbed everything that was bad inside of us ( as i already said The sadness, hurt, angry, etc...), created a portal To another world, and locked everything bad of us inside of it.( she locked the portal as well) (sorry if its confusing).

Years passed, and unfortunatly, our guardian got weaker and weaker and died. Her soul didnt want To leave us, so, her bright soul went To the sky, and the moon was created, and everyday when it gets dark, she illuminates the sky.

(...) humans started To die as well and Their souls went To the sky, allways near the guardian, so the stars were created.

( most of things must be keeped has a mystery, please dont get bothered if you dont understand)

FinallY: the portal To the other world, the world of our dark feelings, broke, and everything got messy, and confused, instead we getting Back has the normal humans ( full of bad feelings with only some Good feelings), others species were created. Some of them kept beeing pure, others changed, others became monsters ( and demons). No longer it was a peace world, everyone feared everyone. This IS what i have so far. Im so sorry for the bad grammar and english as well. Any questions, just ask gently xp. Did you understand? Did you liked it? Remember this IS just the legend. The TRue adventure story isnt this one!