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These are not main characters. I hope it isnt confusing. And also its fantasy type o story ( proba ily +12) but i really need help from everyone!

So since i was a kid ive always loved "little red riding hood" and i thought i could use it somehow so heres my idea:
Girl -> Raven ( not sure about the name..) - dark hair - white skin - yellow eyes - she is very shy yet dangerous. Very. XD ( based on the wolf )
Boy -> Jasper - blond hair - green eyes - very strong and serious yet silly ( based on red riding hood ; please dont think of him like a shy or weak person, imagine the red riding hood boy version. The hot version. ( xD )

Its just an idea. Im just asking if i should use it or is it stupid. What do you think. If any questions i will answer right away!! Thank you for reading!

These are character ideas. Is it good? Copyright!!!

Sarina · Accepted Answer

First of all, you can't write COPYRIGHT, because there's honestly nothing here to work with. There is no story idea. There is absolutely nothing.
All that you gave us was character descriptions, which anyone can pull out of there brain in like, 5 seconds. Honestly, all you gave us was that you wanted to work with Little Red Riding Hood, which has been done at least a thousand times. But any good author is able to take a very 'unoriginal' idea and make it their own.

Good luck + have fun writing!

Sarina:)

Andymcroo · Answer

Yeah, I'm not quite sure what you mean when you say 'shy yet dangerous', if dangerous means that she's a killer, then she wouldn't be shy. Shy and dangerous are kinda opposites, if you know what I mean. The same applies to serious and silly. Just be careful not to make the characters too complicated to fit into the story.

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