What's wrong with this Limerick, and why?

A poet once took up the challenge
To find a word rhyming with orange.
     He spoke choice after choice,
     Almost losing his voice,
'Til he sucked on a menthol throat lozenge.

2009-02-21T07:51:31Z

Oh my! A pointless Limerick.
Who would have thought......

2009-02-21T21:32:21Z

There is nothing 'chi-chi' about me, Jon,
unless you mean Chi-Chi the Giant Panda.
In which case, one could argue a slight
resemblance:
http://www.engadget.com/media/2006/06/p1020332.jpg

Acorn2009-02-21T09:56:44Z

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I love it, Crates. Off-rhyme is very chi-chi in the elite of poesy, ya know.

I remember seeing an ancient clip from a TV show with Petula Clark ("Downtown," "Don't Sleep in the Subway," lotsa hits back in the 50s and 60s).

She posited: Cockneys are the only people in the world who have a rhyme for the word orange. It's the thing that allows a door to swing open and closed: a door 'inge.

For some reason that makes me laugh.

DeeJayB2009-02-21T15:19:15Z

The last line has to many syllables. It should have the same as the first 2, which have 9. Last line has 10.

Experto Credo2009-02-21T15:53:14Z

"Lozenge" is not even considered a close rhyme to "orange", which has no pure rhyme. Ditto for "challenge".

The only word, which is barely acknowledged, is "door-hinge" and that limits what you can do

GotThatJustinBieberFever; ♥.2009-02-21T15:20:22Z

Nothing rhymes with orange.

-2009-02-21T15:33:24Z

Nothing's wrong with it, 'cause I never could say lozenge correctly!
sounds good to me!

ma

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