Is it a good poem......!!?? please be honest?
my poem is published in a online magazine but i think that it's not a good poem. What are your thoughts??
http://www.teenink.com/poetry/all/article/134413/Its-you/
my poem is published in a online magazine but i think that it's not a good poem. What are your thoughts??
http://www.teenink.com/poetry/all/article/134413/Its-you/
liesel meminger
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WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
noeusuperstate
You're right it isn't very good, still most poetry isn't very good.
I have written dozens and only one or two have any depth of character to really move people and retain value beyond on initial reading.
If you enjoy poetry keep writing and when something moves you truly deeply you will find that this will fall onto the page and the reader will detect it.
Good luck
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You are from India, hai na? You poem is really sweet, dear! Its touching! Would you like 2 be my friend, dear?
oruboris
'its you, only you' sounds like it's addressed to a lover, not a sister.
Other than that, pretty generic, Hallmark card stuff.
Anonymous
Its all right... nothing that gets the average man excited... but its written pretty well...