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another poem.... for someone lost.?

Blank bleak void where once

the memory of you lived

What smile? Pretty crooked teeth,

perhaps, with eyes of blue

or brown or black at dawn

Lithe nimble scathing wit or

dull plodding talk of you

with no time to stop

for latest news from me

Or selfless interest in

my life and wants granting

all my desires, endlessly...

Memories seize me though

the effort to pulverize

each and every incredible

perfect part of you becomes

with time

a quicker calmer effort

though the pain never dies

nor the glint in your blue eyes.

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago
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    It is a good thought stream. The vocabulary is high, but not overdone. Maybe a little blurry...could be that I had too much glint and tonic...TD

  • 5 years ago

    Poems will no longer be able to be TRANSLATED, yet they are able to be REWRITTEN with the help of yet another poet who is conscious suitable the two languages or there could desire to be a cooperation between 2 persons. The final one that writes "the hot poem" into the hot language (English) could desire to actual be a poet. i could desire to study some stable interpretations of super Romanian poets, and have them on Wikipedia. it could be super for the human form, as Shakespeare is. there is all into the realisation of an analogous imagery with the unique. Or Romanian language enable poetic photos by using words completely distinctive from the suitable which technique of the words. Or in English language it is not allowed, as long as I even have been stated. that's no longer easy, yet we could have the perfection with a helping cooperation, with the help of a few community English conversing poets. i could like for British Council to nevertheless save and sell exceptionally into the faculties those English LITERATURE instructions. little ones are additionally suitable to have their thoughts expressed into arts, they are the suitable. Edit: If i could nicely be of any small help in such company interior Wikipedia, no longer a particular individual, here i'm !!! I comprehend this suggests sacrificed time. Edit: Bob, you probably desire a mathematician to work out greater effective below the floor; they have imaginitive and prescient. you will do the rest interior your community language once you're a poet. :)

  • 1 decade ago

    I didn't get it at first, but it's good. The thoughts kind of stream together and it's comfusing to me, but It's nice.

  • 1 decade ago

    Sad memory... beautifully expressed... Life is a loss sometimes.

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  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    Very nice work.

    True emotion.

  • 1 decade ago

    I'll have a Cheeseburger large fries and a Mountain dew.

  • 1 decade ago

    cool, are you from Romania?

  • 1 decade ago

    Very nice poem. Glint is such a good word! Thank you for sharing.

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    awesome.. your mind is in a good place : )

  • 1 decade ago

    i like it. it's really good...i have blue eyes.. hehe have a good day!

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    wow you have talent. be my friend. i write too!!! i won a few contests but you have true talent

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