Yahoo Answers is shutting down on May 4th, 2021 (Eastern Time) and beginning April 20th, 2021 (Eastern Time) the Yahoo Answers website will be in read-only mode. There will be no changes to other Yahoo properties or services, or your Yahoo account. You can find more information about the Yahoo Answers shutdown and how to download your data on this help page.

Do you think that I should become a songwriter?

Tell me what you think of these two unfinished songs:

I haven't felt this way...... in several days...... and it's all because of you.......So, when I see you standing there...... I just look up at you and stare......... oooh............stare..................

every time I look you in your eye..... it just makes me want to cry.... and if you want to know why..... then I mustn't tell you a lie..... and the reason is because after all those years we spent together.... one day you just decided to leave me forever.... and I'm just still missing you because I thought our love was true..... and now that I know I was wrong... I'm just writing this song.... and if you ever want to come back to live with me then please.... babe...... feel free.

By the way, "............." just means that you sing that word longer than the rest....or hold it longer than the rest.

7 Answers

Relevance
  • ?
    Lv 7
    1 decade ago
    Favorite Answer

    Go for it, you can only try.I know someone who sent a "Demo", for fun, to Hank Marvin The song "Miss You Nights". He's actually a friend.

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    Definatly

    I am a songwritter

    Always write any lyrics you come up with in a notebook

    Take it with you everywhere (but dont loose it)

    If you are ever stuck on finishing a song, leave it until you find inspiration

    I started a song in Jan and ended it in Dec

    Never force yourself to finish if the inspiration isnt there

    And good luck

    (also, learning guitar or piano DEFINATLY helps - just a few simple chords do the trick)

    xXx

  • 1 decade ago

    It sounds alright...though to be a profesional songwriter (im guessing thats what you meant as anyone could write a song)

    you'll have to have more ideas and inspirations than that.

    Keep it up though

  • 1 decade ago

    It depends on what type of music your doing. These sound would sound best in an alternative/rock style. but other than that keep it up Its got potential

  • How do you think about the answers? You can sign in to vote the answer.
  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    it sounds really meaning full

    you'd make a great song writer

    i cant wait to see if you make something of this

    good luck in everything

    the music to this should be awsome

  • Anonymous
    1 decade ago

    Give it a shot - who knows?

    See if you can find someone who plays music to help you out.

  • 1 decade ago

    i would say their pretty good but try to make everything rhyme with one word. but other than that its good!!

Still have questions? Get your answers by asking now.