Does this feel enough like a feeling?

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the meal meant little
less than my words 
unheard over your hurt
so we drove 
away 
from the issue
and I felt you
in loud language

I felt you
reach to me
folding us in your hand

I felt you
forcing then back 
to be a chance for now 

I felt you
lock our Love
with tomorrow in mind

and with one hand
my world could breathe
inhaling all the hope
I have been crying for
.
.

Regwah · Accepted Answer

Feels good, Sin's taunting has just sent me rolling in laughter all over the place.

Lola · Answer

gently takes away the black polish
and Mach 3
just bask in the beauty 
of your words
like I am
ok?     ok

Anonymous · Answer

Ahahaha...

dude shave yer nutz now
cut and bleed
be metro cuz soon
you'll be an X
and stuff
and things that
bleed

Oh 
God !

Y !!!

Daisy · Answer

Oh my gawd your so EMO.

emo emo HP is an EMO

Sorry..they called me an emofag twice in one day...just spreading the good cheer!  Nice write, HP

? · Answer

....A great feeling poem for your friend.
The hand locking the our Love...I could feel
inhaling all the hope...I could hear
all at once breathless,,,your friend is true blue
I hope he sees this..and feels like you and I do
The car is nice too...the words..delicious...food for thought

Anonymous · Answer

Its very emotional.

I love it. Its amazing. It sounds like what I want but, am never going to have.

Sandy Giggles · Answer

everything you write has feeling.  This is not bad--Sin's answer made me laugh!

I like this one berry much

revired · Answer

Wonderful too. I think you should get working on your book.

? · Answer

The hope of new love found.  It's what we all desire in life.  To be loved.  Nice writing.  Thanks for sharing.

jenny · Answer

I felt it.

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Does this feel enough like a feeling?

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