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I wrote a poem today. Tell me, what do you think?
"Rivers Run Red”
We are made in his image.
That’s what they say.
From our kind hearts,
To our violent ways.
We show our love,
our passion, our hate.
We even destroy the very
Things we create.
Whether it be machine,
A home,
Or the children we name.
Even the lives we make
In search of some fame.
All left in the dust
Of the riots that rage
In the streets we called home.
And we just look away.
We wage war on your brothers.
Our rivers run red.
As our children fight our battles.
It’s their blood that is shed.
It’s their lives that are lost
Because of mistakes in the past.
It’s their lives that are lost
Because of one name heard so vast.
In gods name we “pray.”
As we wait for the day.
As we wait for our questions
To be answered.
As we wait for our answers
Too many lives are lost.
Enough waiting,
I say,
It’s all a lost cause.
9 Answers
- Anonymous4 years ago
this could properly be a properly built piece of paintings yet ought to I advise what may be a reasonable progression to the pass of the words? try making stanzas 4 5 and six have first lines with out better than 4 words. this will additionally provide the poen some 'facet' yet nevertherless this is a superb poem. Congrats
- LylaLv 41 decade ago
This is a great poem. Well put together. I'm gonna feel so dumb if these are lyrics or something.
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