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What feelings are conveyed by our poem?Found,Then Lost?

Written by Rosa and I.

It’s just the expression

On her mildly spun features

That salves his wounds

And undoes his mortal

His possible being

The one who could have been

Who might have been

But never was.

Lovingly raised, his hand

Reaches like sun-sweetened tendrils;

Bleached by distended, bloated sun beams

To her faded picture

His possible being

The one who could have been

Who might have been

But never was.

What was left of the star

Engorged in all self-encompassing jealousy

Time’s sand scratched glass bubble

That dictates his spirit

His possible being

The one who could have been

Who might have been

But never was.

(A poem dedicated to the tribulations of a man who travels to the future, finds love, but must return back to the present, having his "possible" being ripped away and struggling against the irresistable currents of Time.)

ROSA>>>>T.B.O.

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  • 10 years ago
    Favorite Answer

    Honestly...mostly disgust...yours. I don't believe I've ever before seen things as typically innocuous as rays o' sun and sands o' time endowed with such lethality or malevolence. Where is his responsibility in all this? Why isn't he expecdted to overcome these handicaps or, in some cases, at most,. inconveniences?

    Was rife...and rich...with awesome graphical power tho'; I quite enjoyed it!

    WRITE ON...^10!!!

  • 10 years ago

    Good idea for a poem. How does it make me feel? Feelings of sadness and frustration come to mind. So near and yet so far.

  • Anonymous
    10 years ago

    you met your match so keep her.you two even write great together,keep it up.

    this is a bad scenario,poor guy.like the twilight zone,gripping and heart ripping.

    thanks friend. peace

    Troxx

    Source(s): truth
  • ?
    Lv 7
    10 years ago

    pretty amazing, yet oh so sad.....

    But the poem itself is amazing~ great write!

    You see what two can produce together?

    Happy to hear you are doing fine~

    keep writing my friends~

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  • ?
    Lv 6
    10 years ago

    Great idea,well spun,but sad ending...sniff...

  • 10 years ago

    Yowee this made me tingle, tremble and tear up.

    I'm at a loss other than to say, sadly, lovely.

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eB5SjKhPy4o

  • ?
    Lv 6
    10 years ago

    feelings? sadness ...like a vapor you can see but never grasp

    good poem...

  • Anonymous
    10 years ago

    disbelief and

    anguish

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