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What feelings are conveyed by our poem?Found,Then Lost?
Written by Rosa and I.
It’s just the expression
On her mildly spun features
That salves his wounds
And undoes his mortal
His possible being
The one who could have been
Who might have been
But never was.
Lovingly raised, his hand
Reaches like sun-sweetened tendrils;
Bleached by distended, bloated sun beams
To her faded picture
His possible being
The one who could have been
Who might have been
But never was.
What was left of the star
Engorged in all self-encompassing jealousy
Time’s sand scratched glass bubble
That dictates his spirit
His possible being
The one who could have been
Who might have been
But never was.
(A poem dedicated to the tribulations of a man who travels to the future, finds love, but must return back to the present, having his "possible" being ripped away and struggling against the irresistable currents of Time.)
ROSA>>>>T.B.O.
8 Answers
- Rayven53Lv 610 years agoFavorite Answer
Honestly...mostly disgust...yours. I don't believe I've ever before seen things as typically innocuous as rays o' sun and sands o' time endowed with such lethality or malevolence. Where is his responsibility in all this? Why isn't he expecdted to overcome these handicaps or, in some cases, at most,. inconveniences?
Was rife...and rich...with awesome graphical power tho'; I quite enjoyed it!
WRITE ON...^10!!!
- cassie58Lv 710 years ago
Good idea for a poem. How does it make me feel? Feelings of sadness and frustration come to mind. So near and yet so far.
- Anonymous10 years ago
you met your match so keep her.you two even write great together,keep it up.
this is a bad scenario,poor guy.like the twilight zone,gripping and heart ripping.
thanks friend. peace
Troxx
Source(s): truth - ?Lv 710 years ago
pretty amazing, yet oh so sad.....
But the poem itself is amazing~ great write!
You see what two can produce together?
Happy to hear you are doing fine~
keep writing my friends~
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- 10 years ago
Yowee this made me tingle, tremble and tear up.
I'm at a loss other than to say, sadly, lovely.
- Anonymous10 years ago
disbelief and
anguish