Yahoo Answers is shutting down on May 4th, 2021 (Eastern Time) and beginning April 20th, 2021 (Eastern Time) the Yahoo Answers website will be in read-only mode. There will be no changes to other Yahoo properties or services, or your Yahoo account. You can find more information about the Yahoo Answers shutdown and how to download your data on this help page.

To Prologue Or Not To Prologue?

For anyone who doesn't know...prologues are bad. Evil, really. Most agents will tell you this. They'll tell you not to have a prologue unless the story absolutely needs it.

I'm considering a prologue....

My story starts off with a man and his family; the man is leaving for business and he hints that he knows something that he shouldn't. Something that could save the world. Something that could get him killed.

My main character is the one who kills him in the first chapter. She's an assassin and she's been paid to take him out. We don't learn what he knew for a very long time.

I know this is a strong opening, but part of me wonders if the readers would like to start off knowing what this guy knows, which I can add to a prologue.

What do you think?

5 Answers

Relevance
  • Anonymous
    9 years ago
    Favorite Answer

    They wouldn't bother to read the story if you solved the riddle in a prologue!

  • 9 years ago

    Most of the time you have to try it first. Write it out and see how well it works.

    Without knowing the details it is pretty hard to give you and answer.

    The reason most editors and agents hate prologues is because people use them as an info dump. It also breaks the flow of the action.

    I had a prologue for my most recent novel, but I ended up turning it into chapter one after a rewrite. It just fit into the story better. So you can always write it and decide what to do with it later. Maybe you will cut it, or maybe you will incorporate it into the story as a flashback. There are so many options, just try it out and you will find your way.

    Sometimes prologues are necessary, and sometimes they are even good. I loved the prologue for the first book of the Wheel of Time. I don't think I would have read the rest of the book, or the series at all, without it.

  • 5 years ago

    Prologues are problematical. frequently they are actually not mandatory and the textile would nicely be fed into the story. between the suitable materials i've got come for the period of concerning prologues and how suitable to write down them and in the event that they're mandatory, is a e book called between the strains with the aid of Jessica web site Morrell. i'd recommend finding up the e book because it is going to answer your questions.

  • 9 years ago

    Do whatever it is that YOUR story NEEDS. Don' add a prologue if it isn't actually needed. Add it if it is.

    And yes, most agents and editors really hate prologues.

  • How do you think about the answers? You can sign in to vote the answer.
  • 9 years ago

    I don't think you should give away what man knows at the start. Maybe drop hints, but don't give it all away. The prologue idea sounds good :)

Still have questions? Get your answers by asking now.