Intro to a story/movie - 'FATE' - Y!Feedback please?

Presented on http://youtu.be/_G5l69uR8Xc - two minutes, or the pace you think you should read it at for best absorption...

ACTION √CIRCUMSTANCES = FATE

DEEDS √AFFAIRS = FATE

WORK √LIFE = FATE

SAYING √SILENCE = FATE

CHANGE √CONSTANTS = FATE

ATTEMPT √SUCCESS = FATE

FATE √ETERNITY = ETERNAL FATE

FATE √LIFETIME = CIRCUMSTANCES

In the year 3330, a military museum called 'The Pentagon' will vanish.

Depending on humanity's fate, it will either take all nefarious elements with it, or serve as a portal ushering in evil from the universal constant...

While these are Boolean formula, it still remains that if each aforementioned statement is taken and calculated to a degree of mathematical accuracy; proven with the appliance of science and shown working by example using hypothetical formula and actual events -

- the outcome is true.

Does it grab you?

Will this pivotal moment make an interesting plot in light of all the movies there are already?

Should it be utopian/dystopian/sci-fi/horror/fantasy/comedy/drama/etc...?