I wrote this poem about a year and a half ago. What do you think?

Love me not

Why can't you love for who I am
But you love me when I'm not
Do you love me not
Do you like to see me cry
Hide in a corner and wish that I would die
Do you enjoy my tears
Do you like to watch me shake as you toy with my fears

Anonymous2008-02-28T21:00:19Z

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Nice. Try to rework it so you have the rhyme scheme going.

ie cry die tears fears

Ian M2008-02-29T04:48:36Z

I like it.

You have a gift.

Jay Argentina2008-02-28T22:52:15Z

i like that one a lot... one of my personal favorites so far... still working on one you posted earlier...

Bonita C2008-02-28T20:12:13Z

Nice but what is it about just kitting but I don't see no meaning.

Brittney S2008-02-28T19:54:19Z

wowwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thats great