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Something I wrote when I was 13, what do you think?

https://sites.google.com/site/slurexe97slegacyofth...

This was the very very first version of LotO, written several years back when I was still 13. Please don't judge the current story by this. Up to chapter 3 is posted, if you want to read its continuation.

What do you think? I think it's pretty bad, is it?

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  • Anonymous
    8 years ago
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    I can see that you had put a lot of effort into your writing at the time. It was very good for the age you were at.

    I don't believe you should judge yourself so harshly. Without writing that first draft you would have never continued the second so it has its purpose in time. :)

  • 8 years ago

    I thought it was pretty good. Definitely better than me when I was when I was 13. Keep working with your talent, you've definitely got potential. :)

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